Friday, 6 February 2015

Coursework feedback


Clear grasp of the codes and conventions of the film noir genre. This group filmed together and then produced two separate edits to ensure all group members took a full part. Charlie took the initiative and led all activities until separated to ensure others in the group edited a version. Appropriate music for the genre has been added and is an effective way to begin the film with institutional credits allying it to Warner Brothers historical film noir output.   Charlie creates his own production company logos to go with this showing an awareness of film industry processes.  Some of the early shots are dark but editing covers this and uses the dark to advantage with white titles overlaid with credits so meaning is clearer compared to the other group linked with this footage.  A sensitivity toward editing is clearer in this version showing superior editing skills. Sound is attended to in the use of an alarm to signify the start of the voice-over which clearly indicates the opening of the film. A range of shots are used as the detective dresses using a full range of shot types and clear continuity. The voice-over establishes the narrative with an accent further establishing character and showing an awareness of generic conventions. Use of costume and props is appropriate and considered. The final sequence is less secure in framing and use of the camera but does not detract from the proficiency of technical skill which approaches the top end of level 3

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